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http://www.baltimoreexaminer.com >> Michael Olesker - The article is titled "The sad, sad, state of college english" discusses the importance of reading and writing for success and documents the decline of our language skills. The author is right on the mark.  I have done proofreading for various people and have found many errors and strange sentences … Continue reading www.baltimoreexaminer.com >> Michael Olesker

reduced risk of longevity…

Overweight kids face irreversible damage to their bodies and a reduced risk of longevity... That's what this article says about the dangers of obesity. Of course the dangers of obesity are very real; but what about the danger of bad sentence structure ? Shouldn't that be "risk of reduced longevity" ? LOL !